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James
Sept 7, 2014 19:29:54 GMT -5
Post by ZombieDragon on Sept 7, 2014 19:29:54 GMT -5
James
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Nickname(s): NA Gender: Male Race: God of Storms Age: looks 20, is actually over 1,000 Sexuality: Straight
Likes: Storms, Watching the Mortal Realm, The Divine Realm, Visiting the Mortal Realm Dislikes: Fighting, War, Killing, Using Force Strengths: Magic, Smart, Fast, Strong Flaws: Magic power can be overwhelming, can become Violent, Dangerous when Violent. General Personality: Confident, Calm, Smart, Relaxed
Basic Appearance: Yellow Eyes, Black Hair, 5ft 10in, Pale, Skinny Preferred Clothing: Yellow Scarf, Black Jacket, White Tshirt, Black fingerless Gloves, Black Pants, Black Boots Starting Weapons/Powers: Storm Magic (Wind, Water, and Lightning), Wind Magic, he has a Katana Family: the other Gods and Goddesses History: He was "born" a God but some time after the Mortal world was created. he has controlled the Storms in the mortal realm since he was young. he takes the lives of some mortals with the storms sometimes. Sometimes when he visits the Mortal Realm he will help a mortal with a quest or he might travel with them for awhile. Other Characters on ITL: Marth, Justin, Gray, Lauren, Silvia, Isaac, Morgan, Sophia, Jack "Frost", Cloud Passcode: Chocolate Other: When he is in the Mortal Realm there are 2 Wolves that seem to follow him, he doesn't know why. he uses Wind magic normally but when he is angry or upset he can use Storm Magic.
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James
Sept 8, 2014 17:27:27 GMT -5
Post by Midna on Sept 8, 2014 17:27:27 GMT -5
Looks pretty good! Accepted!
The only thing I noticed is that he's not very developed personality-wise. Sure, those are traits he has, but wondering how would he react to stuff is where personality really works. What would he do if someone in the mortal realm insulted him? What about another Divine? Is he open about who he is, or not so much? Does he regret anything he's done? You don't have to put these in for this app, just food for thought. I'm thinking about posting some of the writing notes I took from the writing panels at DragonCon and sending them to you guys. Maybe some of those could help you (and all of us, as none of us are perfect) at really developing characters in the future. And it's fine if you don't read my notes too. :3
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